Thursday, October 04, 2012

Moon

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Geometry defined,
Compass shapes your daily fate,
Life, a changing moon.

Bow shines with vigor,
Lovers unite on the moon,
Cupid plays the strings.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Moon.




23 comments:

  1. Delicious, for me the moonlight and love are a magical combination and extremely sensual.

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  2. life a changing moon. yes. love this poem.

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  3. I loved the first one.....Nice!

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  4. The beauty of haiku is that it is short and sweet and you seemed to have kept the spirit intact by writing this beautiful piece.
    have a nice day !

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  5. Life ... a walking moon. WOW! What a wonderful line it is. And it's so true. As the moon changes her face from New to Full and again to New so is our life. In our lives we have the sad times and the joyful times just like the moon changes always.
    Nicely composed.

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  6. Sorry instead of 'a walking moon' it should have been 'changing' moon.

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  7. Geometry, life and love together in your splendid haiku, one of your best to me.
    :)

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  8. Oh, these two haiku are great! Science is life, after all :-)

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  9. Shining and waxing and waning, lovely.

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  10. 'Life, a changing moon' I've never thought of it quite like that but I like the concept!! Nicely done.

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  11. The moon changes daily. So does my life. Sometimes not to my liking!


    Full Moon

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