The frogs leapt in joy, jumping on paper boats that sailed on little rivulets of rain water.
"Rain is beautiful." The young frogs were delighted due to the incessant rain that flooded the village over the last few days. Dark clouds dominated the horizon at all hours.
Nearby, an old frog was breathing his last. The water had become too much to bear, and he realized that rain, which seemed so pleasant, could also prove fatal. He closed his eyes, unaware that a poor farmer in the surrounding was experiencing the same fate, grieving the damage of his crops.
This 99 word fiction is shared with Blogging from A to Z April Challenge - F.
Wow. Just Wow. Amazingly written Sinha :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna :-)
DeleteGreat contrast in this story, inspiring piece, covering different perspectives. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteVery relevant post in the scenario that is occurring this year. There has been a great damage to the crops and suffering due floods in various parts of northern India.
ReplyDeleteThat's indeed a sad tale.
DeleteAmazing Amit! Very well written... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana :-)
Deleteyou have such a vivid imagination Amrit! and I simply love the way you are relating the animals to the various issues plaguing us!
ReplyDeleteThank You Shubhangi :-)
DeleteOh wow! Oh wow!
ReplyDeleteI have begun to love animals like the bat and the frog thanks to you :P
Ha ha .. wait for more :p
Deletevery well written! good job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alieux :-)
DeleteI love how you can write brilliant stories from the point of view of animals!
ReplyDeleteFew Things Left Unsaid
Thank You Swathi :-)
DeleteYou have narrated it so well and shown how excess of even good things can prove to be bad. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Prasanna :-)
DeleteYour words make the perspective for animals so easy to relate..!
ReplyDeleteWonderful story
Cheers
Thank You Geetika :-)
DeleteThe story is hard hitting. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rashid :-)
DeleteSo sad but so true! Awesome post Amrit Sinha!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteOne thing can be a blessing to one and a curse to other.
ReplyDeleteThat's true :-)
DeleteVery real and what a perspective Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta :-)
DeleteLife and death, great story! I love rain, by the way:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Jennifer :-)
DeleteA unique imagination,Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteThe same circumstance can bear different fruits for different people.....
ReplyDeleteVery well written and an excellent comparison.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruby :-)
DeleteAmrit, you are on a roll!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteHeart wrenching...
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job yaar Amrit!
Thanks Satya :-)
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