Saturday, January 25, 2014

Her Sharp Words

her sharp words
still lingering in his tears
cold moonless night


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Sharp.



22 comments:

  1. Sometimes words can hurt...especially when they come from someone we love...

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  2. Words do have a sting, a lasting one at that. Good one, Amrit.

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  3. Words harsh enough to chill the moon. I love it!

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  4. I have also written a similar one... From "her" perspective...
    I understand that men and women feel the same way.. Only the way of expression vary...
    Goood!

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  5. So I come to your blog and I see a whole lotta blog post and haiku that I missed.. I just have to check them out and then I don't wanna leave! Haha! Love this Amrit! You told such a heartbreaking tale in only 13 syllables! Excellence!

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