Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Braving The Tide



You carve the music as I paint the rain
Together, my friend, we will endure the pain.

My canvas strumming your pattern, music in your soul
Nodding in acknowledgment, our dreams, our whole.

We crave for loneliness, solitude is delight
'cause nobody pays a dime for our worthy plight.

In tears and smiles, we are two best friends
Look how this rain showers blessings, the love it sends.

We celebrate our failure, embrace our pride
Life isn't just about winning, but also braving the tide.


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26 comments:

  1. A relationship can shape its own special joy. Love the first line. A great opening.

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  2. Life is about braving the tide. so well written. loved your poem.

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  3. So many good lines in this, well done.

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  4. This is absolutely magnificent. And I love the closing - very powerful Amrit.

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  5. That is a very very optimistic post. ;Loved it!

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  6. 'Life isn't just about winning, but also braving the tide.' How true. It's about doing what you love whether anyone else appreciates it or not. Nice Mag!

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  7. Ah! A poem about living life and relationship with others--rain...or shine!

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  8. Ah... I loved it... isn't it too musical... i felt such :)

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  9. I like how the rhyming musicality in this pen complements the image ~

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  10. This one is brilliant Mr. Sinha :)

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  11. Love each of your line...
    cute and deep :)

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  12. I just loved the tone of this promise, braving the tide... Wonderful as always Amrit!!

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  13. This was so beautiful and so so brave. Every line made its point.

    Wonderful! :)

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