Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Grimace

bored of his talks
she left the date incomplete
angered, he grimaced


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Grimace.



24 comments:

  1. Ha, doesn't sound like a perfect match, to say the least.

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  2. Angered at himself? Nicely done.

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  3. The grimace of disappointment on a date...nicely done Amrit!!

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  4. HAHAHAH I like her! She sounds like me.

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  5. Very cruel action on her part!! Ditched in love! Nice haiku.

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  6. He should have been a better listener :)

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  7. *sigh* I like dates that end well! :-)

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  8. Poor guy! Nice haiku:)
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  9. better teach him haiku writing
    nicely expressed !

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