Saturday, July 20, 2013

Time

oh my dear Time
will you accompany me
when I meet her

oh my dear Time
will you be patient and mild
when we are lost in love

oh my dear Time
will you rest for longer moments
to delay the goodbyes


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Time.





38 comments:

  1. It is very poignant how you implore Time in this piece. Nicely expressed.

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  2. time is all we need.. and that's the one thing we can't have
    neither more nor less !!

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  3. ver well expressed. Time flies when we want it to move slowly.

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  4. Time should accept the pledge of a lover :) very nicely expressed !

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  5. If this could be true, I would be the queen of the world. Haha.. JK.
    But, yeah, queen of My world for sure.
    Beautifully written.

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  6. ...don't worry...your time will :)) Delightful set..:))

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  7. Beautiful set I love the 2nd one especially

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  8. Nice write,,enjoyable...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

    RS

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  9. Time will surely heed such poetic requests:) beautifully composed Amrit:)

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  10. I hope time listens...beautiful haiku

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  11. Romantic. Time shall hear you. :)

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  12. oh my dear amrit
    i think that you are in love
    enjoy the moment:)

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  13. If only time could be managed so that it would linger over lovely things and hurry over the not so good bits! I loved your haiku x

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  14. Loved the last 2 lines most- do the delay the good-byes!

    Nice Haiku but I wonder if you followed 5-7-5 pattern?

    www.numerounity.com

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    1. Thanks Ekta. I did follow 5-7-5 earlier, but not anymore, as that feels more like a restriction.

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  15. Oh my Amrit. I totally feel in love with your Haiku this time. Each of them is so welll crafted. Time, wish it waits for us to experience and slowly witness all those wonderful moments :) loved it again :)

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  16. The dilemma of lovers so very eloquently expressed :-)

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  17. LOve and time are not really the best of friends. They share a very confusing bond according to me in fact. Found you at haiku heights. Will come back to read more such inspiring words for sure :)

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