Thursday, July 11, 2013

Pebbled Stream

pebbled stream
where once rowed my paper boat
now memories ripple


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Forgotten Brook.




36 comments:

  1. Amazing Haiku, Amrit. Bringing memories of childhood to the fore is nostalgic!

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  2. Rippling memories...taking you back to the paper boats of childhood...lovely little piece...

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  3. Yes, I've floated paper boats in those flows.

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  4. I have floated many a paper boat in many a stream

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  5. a gorgeously vivid rippling memories....emotional, too, and a bit poignant...

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  6. I like your line "memories ripples". Nice Haiku. :)

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  7. I love this and it captures one of the many possible interpretations of Jane's haiku.

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  8. Ah those wonderful childhood memories. My childhood feels like million years ago ... so in touch with the haiku by Jane.

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  9. I see memories floating in my mind's eye now, beautiful Amrit :)

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  10. This is so reflective and beautiful. Those ripples of life...

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  11. Wow! :)
    You are just excellent at Haikus! Hats off!

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