Tuesday, July 23, 2013

My Silken Paradise



blooming like a lotus
my silken paradise
floats on its shadow
musical ripples
glowing with the sun

a midnight feast
waiting to be savored
right here
once the moon adorns the silent waves
with dewy diamonds


This Poem is shared with Picture It And Write.





12 comments:

  1. I like the image of the moon adorning the silent waves with dewy diamonds & also the very effective alliteration in that second stanza!

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  2. I agree with Mary. Another beautiful poem. :)

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  3. Lovely word picture! Very beautiful description :)

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  4. A feast with the moon and dewy diamonds, now that is paradise indeed :)

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  5. beautiful poem with lovely imagery

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  6. Love the last two lines; they sound like a dream.

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