blooming like a lotus
my silken paradise
floats on its shadow
musical ripples
glowing with the sun
a midnight feast
waiting to be savored
right here
once the moon adorns the silent waves
with dewy diamonds
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I like the image of the moon adorning the silent waves with dewy diamonds & also the very effective alliteration in that second stanza!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
DeleteI agree with Mary. Another beautiful poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Balqis :-)
DeleteLovely word picture! Very beautiful description :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteA feast with the moon and dewy diamonds, now that is paradise indeed :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem with lovely imagery
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteLove the last two lines; they sound like a dream.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
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