Well. Amrit, I would put this in a greeting card but only to one very special person standing always right next to me. It is beautiful, sincere--and could only be born from one who understands love first hand.
lovely little love poem...its got a fun but comforting rhythm... the opening stanza in particular about the beats made me think of hearts... and the promise and truth was a great line...
Well written poem. Lovers live is a world of their own full of joy and happiness which cannot be experienced in this world. Love is a magic potion for all the ills of this world.
Very wise thought,Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
Deletelovely :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sumana :-)
DeleteInteresting poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Uppal :-)
DeleteAmrit! How do you think of all of this :) Lovely as always!
ReplyDeleteThank You Wanderer :-)
DeleteThat's such a sweet poem Amrit..!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Thanks Geetika :-)
DeleteIn my next life I am going to marry a computer technician :)
ReplyDeleteOk :-p
DeleteWell less is more! What a wonderful gift to whom it is intended
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae :-)
DeleteWell. Amrit, I would put this in a greeting card but only to one very special person standing always right next to me. It is beautiful, sincere--and could only be born from one who understands love first hand.
ReplyDeleteThank You Susan :-)
Deletelovely little love poem...its got a fun but comforting rhythm...
ReplyDeletethe opening stanza in particular about the beats made me think of hearts...
and the promise and truth was a great line...
Thanks Brian :-)
DeleteII simp[ly love this. It's romantic and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Myrna :-)
DeleteWell written poem. Lovers live is a world of their own full of joy and happiness which cannot be experienced in this world. Love is a magic potion for all the ills of this world.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Thank You Joseph :-)
DeleteWow, this is absolutely stunning!! Should be on a Valentine card!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Mary :-)
DeleteAmrit - your words of love are priceless. We can never say enough about love but it is in the sparse few that we catch the upward draft
ReplyDeleteThanks Moonie :-)
DeleteSo joyful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Meisner :-)
DeleteVery nicely put in few words.
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DeleteThis was beyond beautiful Amrit jee!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Red jee :-D
DeleteA very sweet poem for Valentine's week.
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DeleteWonderful poem at the appropriate time! Loved it,Amrit! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ramya :-)
DeleteThis is beautifully done and captures the heart,
ReplyDeleteThanks Alan :-)
DeleteLovely Valentine's poem--I sensed the beauty of enduring love.
ReplyDeleteThank You Victoria :-)
Deletevery nice
ReplyDeleteThanks Bev :-)
DeleteI love your opening lines ... we counted silence in beats of two. Very sweet poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Suzy :-)
DeleteSo right... in the spirit of Valentine's day :)
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful love...
Thanks Nimi :-)
DeleteA beautiful love story unfolds....Awesome!
ReplyDeleteOw, beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteA lovely write Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThank You Carrie :-)
DeleteSo beautiful! :)
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Delete"Just flew"...lovely, everyone's dream :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Meenal :-)
DeleteVery nice one...
ReplyDeleteRhyming also?
Auto-biographical also?? :P
He he he :p
DeleteWhat a lovely rhyming love poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Margaret :-)
DeleteThank You Ankita :-)
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