Friday, February 13, 2015

Our Love Anew

62 comments:

  1. Amrit! How do you think of all of this :) Lovely as always!

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  2. That's such a sweet poem Amrit..!

    Cheers

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  3. In my next life I am going to marry a computer technician :)

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  4. Well less is more! What a wonderful gift to whom it is intended

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  5. Well. Amrit, I would put this in a greeting card but only to one very special person standing always right next to me. It is beautiful, sincere--and could only be born from one who understands love first hand.

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  6. lovely little love poem...its got a fun but comforting rhythm...
    the opening stanza in particular about the beats made me think of hearts...
    and the promise and truth was a great line...

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  7. II simp[ly love this. It's romantic and beautiful.

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  8. Well written poem. Lovers live is a world of their own full of joy and happiness which cannot be experienced in this world. Love is a magic potion for all the ills of this world.

    Best wishes

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  9. Wow, this is absolutely stunning!! Should be on a Valentine card!

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  10. Amrit - your words of love are priceless. We can never say enough about love but it is in the sparse few that we catch the upward draft

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  11. Very nicely put in few words.

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  12. This was beyond beautiful Amrit jee!!

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  13. A very sweet poem for Valentine's week.

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  14. Wonderful poem at the appropriate time! Loved it,Amrit! :)

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  15. This is beautifully done and captures the heart,

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  16. Lovely Valentine's poem--I sensed the beauty of enduring love.

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  17. I love your opening lines ... we counted silence in beats of two. Very sweet poem.

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  18. So right... in the spirit of Valentine's day :)
    Such beautiful love...

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  19. A beautiful love story unfolds....Awesome!

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  20. "Just flew"...lovely, everyone's dream :)

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  21. Very nice one...
    Rhyming also?
    Auto-biographical also?? :P

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  22. What a lovely rhyming love poem.

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