Friday, March 28, 2014

Evanesce

a few lost pebbles
and bagful of memories
who cares, anyways
waves, red and black, sink my soul
and I melt away, alone

This Tanka is shared with HAIKU/TANKA CHALLENGE #1 EVANESCE.



22 comments:

  1. Makes me want to drown in melancholy. Beautiful!

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  2. Absolutely stunning Amrit though you speak of melancholy your words are so inspired and beautiful

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  3. The sad undertone just tugs at the heart...

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  4. Such a joy and a breath of fresh air to come here. Lovely haiku Amrit!

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  5. Thank you Amrit, for your words, most enjoyed and likeable. And yes, at my age does occur those remembrances, which seem now as cloudless nothingness. EVEN though they are yet in this spaceless, timeless moment of Eternity, for none escape.
    You, Sir, are CERTAINLY not alone, of all I "know".....
    PEACE and LIGHT.

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  6. The last line is so touching. Excellent work, Amrit. :)

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  7. lost in the crowd of so many..
    beautiful

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  8. The feeling of being lost makes me want to be one of the pebbles...!

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