Monday, March 31, 2014

Trip

a goodbye so soon
wish I could stop the sand
and let the trip flow


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Trip.



28 comments:

  1. You always write beautiful Haiku, Amrit. I'm amazed by your creativity. Keep writing! :)

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  2. A good-bye is always an interruption to some good moments. Wonderful write Amrit!

    Hank

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  3. Goodbyes are always hard! Nicely done, Amrit.

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  4. yes ! we sometimes feel like stopping the sand ....nice work Amrit .

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  5. a sad moment beautifully captured!

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  6. Beautiful.... lovely composition as always, Amrit. :)

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  7. If only we could stop time... Beautifully worded Amrit!!

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