Saturday, March 15, 2014

Return

the red pebble
silently flows down the stream
I wait for its return

This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizon - Return.




22 comments:

  1. I used to toss twigs into a moving stream and fallow the twigs path as long as I could. Good times :)

    I miss your visits Amrit!

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    1. Thanks Keith ... I miss too, but work keeping me busy nowadays :-(

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  2. beautiful ! i take the red pebble as a simile of a heart you long for !
    your idea may be a different one ...but the haiku itself has a classic tone !

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  3. Ya ... me too ... waiting for my zest of life to return

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  4. and it will come Amrit, this is sooooo tender.

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  5. I walk down the winding shores of this eternal stream and at every turn, I wait for its return :)

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    1. That's such a beautiful thought :-)

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  6. Waiting is a test of nerves... In this case however the wait seems to be for something that holds a special place in your thoughts.

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    1. Yes, sometimes the wait bears fruit :-)

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  7. Optimism there...
    Nice take on the prompt!

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