Friday, June 05, 2015

Forever



counting our steps
one at a time
in orange glow
and breezing chime
let's walk across the bridge
our fingers seek each other
dear time, please do freeze
as we lose ourselves forever



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34 comments:

  1. Wow :) You seem to be on a romantic spree. And invoking nature too (y) Nice.

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  2. indeed a great atmosphere to get lost within... nice write

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  3. Ah.. yes.. to live now..
    is to live forevermorenow..
    as truly now.. is forever.. and
    time is only illusion..
    of past and
    future..
    neverforeverlessnow..:)

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  4. Beautiful. I smiled because you used two my the same rhyme words I used in my poem for today: time and chime. Peace, Linda

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  5. Love the breezing chime... such an atmosphere here.

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  6. ah....a moment becoming eternity...lovely :)

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  7. What a wonderful thought this is....to be able to freeze some time in a certain situation. Most enjoyable and the rhymes were nice. Good on you! Hayes Spencer is Kanzensakura

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  8. Lovely...some moments we definitely want time to freeze for a long, long time!

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