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counting our steps
one at a time
in orange glow
and breezing chime
let's walk across the bridge
our fingers seek each other
dear time, please do freeze
as we lose ourselves forever
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Wow :) You seem to be on a romantic spree. And invoking nature too (y) Nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay :-)
Deletewhat a beautiful wish!
ReplyDeleteThank You Vandana :-)
DeleteOw, Amrit. This is sublime!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteBeautiful poem. Vivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteindeed a great atmosphere to get lost within... nice write
ReplyDeleteAh.. yes.. to live now..
ReplyDeleteis to live forevermorenow..
as truly now.. is forever.. and
time is only illusion..
of past and
future..
neverforeverlessnow..:)
Thank You Kate :-)
DeleteHow romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana :-)
DeleteBeautiful. I smiled because you used two my the same rhyme words I used in my poem for today: time and chime. Peace, Linda
ReplyDeleteThank You Linda :-)
DeleteLove the breezing chime... such an atmosphere here.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
DeleteA beautiful meditation :D
ReplyDeleteThank You Rose :-)
DeleteMay your wish come true
ReplyDeleteSO romantic!
ReplyDeleteThank You Pooja :-)
Deleteah....a moment becoming eternity...lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
DeleteWhat a wonderful thought this is....to be able to freeze some time in a certain situation. Most enjoyable and the rhymes were nice. Good on you! Hayes Spencer is Kanzensakura
ReplyDeleteThank You Hayes :-)
DeleteVery intense and vivid.
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteLovely...some moments we definitely want time to freeze for a long, long time!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kendall :-)
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