Tuesday, June 30, 2015

Flowers In Thorn



he crosses the line
amidst gunshots and hatred
to grow flowers in thorn


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Thorn.



48 comments:

  1. Great One Amrit ! poignant and full of hope ....

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  2. That's a very nice one Amrit.Reading the haiku the picture of a person trespassing the border to make peace comes into the mind.

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  3. ... sounds like my work place ... smiles ... Love, cat.

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  4. Positive feeling.. Loved it!

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  5. Like the juxtaposition of images.....flowers and thorns !

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  6. This is about so many things at once-all important and beautifully expressed.

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  7. What a romantic and brave warrior...fighting for love and beauty.

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  8. And we live happily because of such brave and selfless persons...
    Hats off to them!

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  9. Hope the person succeeds in his endeavor. Peace should blossom. A beautiful piece of work, Amrit.

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  10. What a deep image of peace work in this poem. We all must cross the barriers for flowers.

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  11. We need more people, and haikus, like that.

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  12. moving ... very very moving! Bastet

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  13. Aw. The risk he took for something beautiful and worthwhile.

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  14. take the risk it would lead to something beautiful:) sad thoughts with beautiful lines:))

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  15. you know how to say a lot in e few words. You tell a complete story. Beautifully crafted piece.
    Swayama Shunya

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