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may her smile shine forever
he had said one day
may she shed those tears never
he had promised in a way
and now when he's gone
when the path seems too wrong
when every truth stares a lie
she still stands so strong
she shall paint her own freedom
the clouds will carry her miles
she shall hold back her heart
that hides away her wilting smile
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Loved the ending and the flow of words, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru :-)
DeleteI agree with Saru. Quite rhythmically executed :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Leo :-)
Deletesmile wilting while the heart holding on and guarding...a wonderful sketch of strength...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
DeleteGreat!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteLovely lines! have to admire her courage..
ReplyDeleteThanks Shubhangi :-)
DeleteI like this story of survival after a broken heart. Your words are lovely and I like the strength you give your character.
ReplyDeleteThank You Myrna :-)
DeleteThis is a great message.
ReplyDeleteThanks GL :-)
DeleteBeautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteEspecially the last para.
Thank You Simran :-)
DeleteSimply beautiful Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana :-)
Deleteso heartfelt and in her smile he will live
ReplyDeleteThank You Vandana :-)
DeletePowerful sentiments in this beautiful piece :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa :-)
DeleteThis is so beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Linda :-)
DeleteSmiles and tears go good together at times ... most times, really. Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cat :-)
DeleteBeautifully written to convey that no matter what, the smile should stay and not wilt away.
ReplyDeleteThank You Somali :-)
DeleteSometimes it is important to be strong and independent. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
DeleteBeautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sarala :-)
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