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nothing ever remains
even the sun would sleep one day
and yet we feel the need
to hold on to stuffs that come our way
begging for more
we forget to relish the walk today
tomorrow it would be late
and we would have nothing to say
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Nothing is permanent..we live in a temporary world.. what once is the shining sun... tomorrow would be none..!
ReplyDeleteWell penned..!
Thanks Sanaa :-)
DeleteTrue that, materialism is taking over our lives.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteYes tomorrow will be late...loved it..
ReplyDeleteThank You Datta :-)
DeleteI liked it! :) Change is the only thing that's constant!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay :-)
DeleteBeautiful message here and I like how effortlessly you rhyme :) too good.
ReplyDeleteThank You Simran :-)
Deletewhy we collect all those things.. just a burden on the road.. alas too true.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
Deleteawesome message Amrit... :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Archana :-)
DeleteAh, yes, far too often we forget to relish the walk today....great reminder, Amrit!
ReplyDeletevery wisely said
ReplyDeleteThank You Vandana :-)
DeleteBrilliant. How do you manage to do this every single time?
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Soumya :-)
DeleteNicely done, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteYou're so right!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary :-)
DeleteTruth written marvelously!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteBrilliant.. The post is so thought provoking..!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Thanks Geets :-)
DeleteNice words. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kahkashan :-)
DeleteSo profound and awakening I must say. And you've send the message across with just a few powerful words. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lux :-)
Deletethought provoking! love it!
ReplyDeleteThank You Meera :-)
DeleteCarries a good message.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteA truth we all know... Yet we fail to follow it religiously...
ReplyDeleteGreat though Amrit :)
Thank You Satya -)
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