Oh, this is good, Amrit! I can feel how much he wants to speak & how much she wants to hear....but there is tension in the fact that it just does not happen.
Sounds like young love and the awkwardness of getting to know one another and not fully understanding how to express their feelings towards one another. Very beautiful Amrit!
Oh I can relate to this one. Great poem. This is my first time visiting your blog & I must say, I'm impressed. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
That's lovely.
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DeleteLoved this poem.
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Deleteso Sweett!!
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute poem it is!
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I can hear the giggles
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa :-)
DeleteOh, this is good, Amrit! I can feel how much he wants to speak & how much she wants to hear....but there is tension in the fact that it just does not happen.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteOh those obstacles... why always the obstacles.. it should be easy.
ReplyDeleteYes it should be :-)
DeleteSounds like young love and the awkwardness of getting to know one another and not fully understanding how to express their feelings towards one another. Very beautiful Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
DeleteOh! Hope they get to exchange what's in their mind & heart :)
ReplyDeleteHope so :-)
DeleteSometimes its a challenge to speak what's in the heart ~ Good one Amrit ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
DeleteOh I can relate to this one. Great poem. This is my first time visiting your blog & I must say, I'm impressed. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
ReplyDeleteThank You Alex :-)
Deleteah, the dance! I remember those! Lovely........
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DeleteThank You Celestine :-)
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