Thursday, March 26, 2015

Missed



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26 comments:

  1. Such a cute poem it is!

    Cheers

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  2. Oh, this is good, Amrit! I can feel how much he wants to speak & how much she wants to hear....but there is tension in the fact that it just does not happen.

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  3. Oh those obstacles... why always the obstacles.. it should be easy.

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  4. Sounds like young love and the awkwardness of getting to know one another and not fully understanding how to express their feelings towards one another. Very beautiful Amrit!

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  5. Oh! Hope they get to exchange what's in their mind & heart :)

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  6. Sometimes its a challenge to speak what's in the heart ~ Good one Amrit ~

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  7. Oh I can relate to this one. Great poem. This is my first time visiting your blog & I must say, I'm impressed. Hope to see more of your work in the future.

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  8. ah, the dance! I remember those! Lovely........

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