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I love the lightning
And the thunder that it accompanies
'Cause it reminds me of you
The moments that flew
As you clutched my arms tight
In the shady rainy shed
The leaves sheltering us from the rain
And we drenched, completely
In sacred passion.
This Poem is shared with Poetry Jam - Lightning.
"And we drenched, completely
ReplyDeleteIn sacred passion." - Beautiful sentiment. :)
Straigt out of Bollywood ;)
ReplyDeleteHa ha :-)
Deletethe last two lines of yr verse are so romantic. lovely. Usually with thunder and lightning are accompanied the two emotions of being scared and loneliness but yr poem brought out a different hue to lightning.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much :-)
DeleteAh...lovely....such passion and that lightening....it's so evident in your words :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sadia :-)
DeleteAmrit you need to write a book of romantic poetry- this is one of your most romantic ones ever!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... thanks a lot my friend :-)
Deletesacred passion...smiles...i like that much...there is much power and energy in the storm...as there is with passion...
ReplyDeleteI agree Brian :-)
DeleteLightning always reminds me I'm alive somehow.
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Yes, it rejuvenates at time :-)
Deletepassion, lightening..
ReplyDeletebeautiful !!
Thanks Jyoti :-)
DeleteHow beautiful. In few words you express such a precious moment.
ReplyDeleteThank You Victoria :-)
Deletehow wonderful your words...never would picture a thunderstorm to look so good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sun :)
DeleteThis post is electrifying. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Irene :-)
DeleteIf lightening is a thread, you have weaved the words like pearly rain drops... Incredible :)
ReplyDeleteWow ... I will add these lines in my next poem :-)
DeleteThis will surely strike readers right in the heart ~~~ nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :-)
DeleteAh, I like this a lot. You really have portrayed the blessing that lightning can bring to one's life! Very well written.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteGood one :)
ReplyDeleteand who is that "you?" #justasking :P
The "You" just flew :-P
DeleteOw lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteLightening puts all emotions on edge. This is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteLightning sure adds a spark to love, nicely done Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
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