Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Entangled Branches

entangled branches
sun ascends through lifeless limbs
beautiful chaos
                     (Anmol a.k.a HA)

My continuation-


entangled branches
sun ascends through lifeless limbs
beautiful chaos
a grasshopper dances
under shade of maple leaf








18 comments:

  1. What a wonderful continuation as always. Amrit I love your writing more and more by the day.

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  2. Amrit this simply fabulous. The words 'beautiful chaos' are exemplary.

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  3. What a beautiful continuation Amrit!

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  4. I can just imagine the dance of the grasshopper!

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  5. So much optimism on the first three lines, and then comes joy on the last two lines. Wonderful! :-)

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  6. Beautifully completed. I like 'under shade of maple leaf.'

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  7. I like the imagery created by you.
    Nicely completed. =]

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  8. The imagery! Oh the imagery!

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  9. Beautifully worded Amrit, would love to be part of this chaos...

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