by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
(JRB)
My Continuation -
by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
footprints on sand
lost in silver waves
This Tan Renga is shared with Carpe Diem - By The Shore.
Yes!! I like this completion!
ReplyDeleteThanks WabiSabi :-)
DeleteYes, I really liked it!:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Tarang :-)
Delete"Lost in silver waves" - my favourite line. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteVery profound!
ReplyDeleteThank You Usha ji :-)
DeleteVery nice!
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DeleteExcellent, thank you for this wonderful completion :)
ReplyDeleteby the shore
Thank You JRB :-)
DeleteAsalamu alaikum,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this lovely post. Please can you give me some tips on Romance over at ireminisces, thank you so much...
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Thanks Iremi :-)
DeletePerfect completion Amrit. Have a great weekend kind sir.
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteOh....that was nice
ReplyDeleteThanks Shalet :-)
DeletePerfected, I think.
ReplyDeleteThanks Momina :-)
DeleteNice imagery!
ReplyDeleteLove the completion.. well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
Deletelike the mention of footprints on sand - nice!
ReplyDelete'Silver waves' Lovely line!
ReplyDeleteExcellent ... a nice completion Amrit.
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