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every breath I count
is a hill I surmount
famished in thirst
and kissing the drought
my lips are wrinkled
and parched and dry
they smell of ember
and crack and weep shy
but a drop of water
or a drizzle would do
my throat burns red
I feel pain anew
the rooster breaks the dawn
yet the sun doesn't rise
the cactus in my tea cup
bids a gentle goodbye
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Love it. the rooster breaks the dawn yet the sun doesn't rise. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThanks Shamsud :-)
DeleteGosh! Hope this is not true in the future...
ReplyDeleteMay we all have enough water.
Save water...
Let's pray so!
DeleteWhew, this gives a strong & creative voice to the subject of drought. Cactus in a teacup - definitely a painful thought.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
DeleteDrought is just pain in the end.. the cactus in the tea is an extremely strong image.. thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
Deletelove the title that speaks of a parched soul...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
DeleteIntense & emotive write.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sanaa :-)
DeleteFacts in a few lovely lines.Nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteI can feel the intense heat - and love the whole idea of a cactus in a teacup!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sherry :-)
DeleteOh I love the imagery... the rooster breaking dawn, cactus in the tea cup...
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
DeleteOh a dream
ReplyDeletea faucet
a cup
that
never
runneth
less than
full as pumping
waters love to homes
of life.. oh what we take
for granted in what our
ancestors and some
still do suffer
for just
a drop
of what
we have..:)
You said it brilliantly. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece :-)
DeleteFinally is back, post marriage :P
ReplyDeleteHappy to read your stuffs again :)
Thanks Noopur :-)
DeleteCactus in tea cup? That was a powerful write....well done.
ReplyDeleteThank You Abhra :-)
DeleteThe first two lines....and "kissing the drought"---and the imagery of that title...wow! Great writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks CC :-)
DeleteOooo.... awesome :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Archana :-)
DeleteYes! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
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