Monday, August 31, 2015

Imitating Past

his grey hair blackened
standing in front of mirror
he imitates past


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Past.



28 comments:

  1. awesome Amrit... loved the idea of imitation...
    and one good Haiku deserves another... here's my take... would love to know what you think of it ;-)
    http://drishti.co/2015/08/31/temple-of-love-and-its-forbidden-tales/

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  2. Everybody wants to hold on to the past.Nice :)

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  3. If only the reflection would show us a younger self from the past!

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  4. Hey, hey, why he wants to look young! Interesting haiku!!

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  5. Ah. I like this, and why not push time back:)

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  6. Everyone wants to die young. Good take. :)

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  7. If only we could hold time!!!

    Cheers

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  8. Loved the climax....super poem :)

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  9. Wow, this is an amazing one :) What an imagination you have!

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  10. Great poem. Really catches a sense of nostalgia.

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