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a world turned upside down
and we would never fall
but rise into the skies
kissing the horizon
amidst the stars
where success will be just
and failure not too harsh
justice shall be served
and lies run scarce
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Ah, this sounds like an ideal world, with success being just and lies being scarce. I wonder if we can find a way to make this possible.
ReplyDeletePerhaps we can, but then again it would need a huge effort from all :-)
Deletenice dream...hope someday materializes...and of course lovely lines...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
Deletereally the world very much needs such a place of miracle..........especially India
ReplyDeleteVery true.
DeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteA wishful reality well cloaked in fantasy!
ReplyDeleteThank You Aqsa :-)
DeleteVery well written Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana :-)
Delete"lies run scarce" How nice that would be. Poem fits the picture so well.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
DeleteSuch a nice thought :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Salvwi :-)
DeleteOne day maybe the world will be a nicer place...
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thank You Anna :-)
DeleteMan won't leave his world to turn upside down, but he may try to bring sky to earth.Nice thought.The second stanza stands for the truth.nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteBeautiful world to dream about!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteThis sounds wonderful..........the mirror-view of our world, only so much better.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry :-)
DeleteA very interesting world that would be.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteHahaha, ideal world to dream about. Wish so!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alok :-)
DeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ineke :-)
DeleteWell this is an absolutely beautiful poem... i like the message it portrays :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa :-)
DeleteArchimedes said give me a point and I shall tople the earth upside down .... :-)
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Delete"And lies run scarce." If only the truth would ever prevail, and justice truly served! Excellent poem here my friend!!
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