Monday, May 11, 2015

Upside Down



a world turned upside down
and we would never fall
but rise into the skies
kissing the horizon
amidst the stars

where success will be just
and failure not too harsh
justice shall be served
and lies run scarce


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35 comments:

  1. Ah, this sounds like an ideal world, with success being just and lies being scarce. I wonder if we can find a way to make this possible.

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    1. Perhaps we can, but then again it would need a huge effort from all :-)

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  2. nice dream...hope someday materializes...and of course lovely lines...

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  3. really the world very much needs such a place of miracle..........especially India

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  4. A wishful reality well cloaked in fantasy!

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  5. "lies run scarce" How nice that would be. Poem fits the picture so well.

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  6. One day maybe the world will be a nicer place...
    Anna :o]

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  7. Man won't leave his world to turn upside down, but he may try to bring sky to earth.Nice thought.The second stanza stands for the truth.nice.

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  8. Beautiful world to dream about!

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  9. This sounds wonderful..........the mirror-view of our world, only so much better.

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  10. A very interesting world that would be.

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  11. Hahaha, ideal world to dream about. Wish so!

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  12. Well this is an absolutely beautiful poem... i like the message it portrays :)

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  13. Archimedes said give me a point and I shall tople the earth upside down .... :-)

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  14. "And lies run scarce." If only the truth would ever prevail, and justice truly served! Excellent poem here my friend!!

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