Wednesday, May 06, 2015

Thirsty Red Ants

those thirsty red ants
ignorant to the high tides
march towards river


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Water.



41 comments:

  1. loved it Amrit :-) don't forget to drop by - http://drishti.co/2015/05/04/water/

    ReplyDelete
  2. Water : the treasured commodity.............................

    ReplyDelete
  3. I love it. I always come to your blog for awesomness! :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. Oh no!! Look out thirsty ants!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Title is pretty catchy...Great Job!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Very nice Haiku, couldn't resist the addition

    Heart parched summer heat
    A few drops of love or hate
    Satiated life

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. that ws lovely +Shweta Dave

      Delete
    2. Wonderfully written Shweta :-)

      Delete
  7. Oho! Poor ants. Splash and all of them into the tide?

    ReplyDelete
  8. ah! I could read your haiku on so many different levels - real, symbolic, metaphorical - excellent

    ReplyDelete
  9. It's quite similar to how to proceed towards certain dangerous things in life, oblivious of what exactly it is.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Ouch! Just like humans. Unaware of the fury of water.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Most of us do it to regret later.
    Good one.

    ReplyDelete