tis beautiful Amrit... :-)
Thanks Archana :-)
Beautiful!
Thank You Geetika :-)
Amrit, is your heart somehow involved between these words and lines? Hmmmm? --grin!
Perhaps the after effect of watching too many sentimental movies at a stretch :-D
Oh, this is hard....to be swept away like that!
Yes it always is.
O! Beautiful lines.
Oh man, love would do that to you. Very nicely written!
Thank You :-)
the sadness is so palpable...Beautifully penned!
Thanks Susmit :-)
Sad for him, happy for your great work.
Thank You Alok :-)
Oh, sad. :(
the rhythm is beautiful, just draws us in...love is like a mirror that reflects the world as well as self...nicely done Amrit :)
Thanks Sumana :-)
Nice one :)
Thank You Salvwi :-)
The ending could not have been more perfect. Beautifully penned!
Thanks Enigma :-)
Yes, it is a sad place to be, very well captured.
Thank You Sherry :-)
This was a bit heart breaking... must be an awful state for a person to be in. Beautifully penned!
Thanks Sanaa :-)
God bless you! (once more)Immanuel
Thank You Emmanuel :-)
The post dump blues wonderfully expressed.
Thanks a lot :-)
Great usage of words Amrit. Powerful poem about love or its antithesis.
So touching! Your work could really touch others' hearts, Amrit.
Thanks Balqis :-)
Beautiful.
Thank You Celestine :-)
The waves in this poem increase the sense of loss--whether loss of love or loss of self in love, I am not sure!
Thanks Susan :-)
Reminded me of Devdas, not the film but the classic novel.
Know that old saying, if loving you is wrong, I don't want to be right? How true it is for some. A saddening little tale here Amrit
Thanks Crystal :-)
tis beautiful Amrit... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana :-)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Geetika :-)
DeleteAmrit, is your heart somehow involved between these words and lines? Hmmmm? --grin!
ReplyDeletePerhaps the after effect of watching too many sentimental movies at a stretch :-D
DeleteOh, this is hard....to be swept away like that!
ReplyDeleteYes it always is.
DeleteO! Beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteOh man, love would do that to you. Very nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
Deletethe sadness is so palpable...Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susmit :-)
DeleteSad for him, happy for your great work.
ReplyDeleteThank You Alok :-)
DeleteOh, sad. :(
ReplyDeletethe rhythm is beautiful, just draws us in...love is like a mirror that reflects the world as well as self...nicely done Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :-)
DeleteNice one :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Salvwi :-)
DeleteThe ending could not have been more perfect. Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Enigma :-)
DeleteYes, it is a sad place to be, very well captured.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sherry :-)
DeleteThis was a bit heart breaking... must be an awful state for a person to be in. Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa :-)
DeleteGod bless you! (once more)
ReplyDeleteImmanuel
Thank You Emmanuel :-)
DeleteThe post dump blues wonderfully expressed.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteGreat usage of words Amrit. Powerful poem about love or its antithesis.
ReplyDeleteSo touching! Your work could really touch others' hearts, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Balqis :-)
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteThe waves in this poem increase the sense of loss--whether loss of love or loss of self in love, I am not sure!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
DeleteReminded me of Devdas, not the film but the classic novel.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteKnow that old saying, if loving you is wrong, I don't want to be right? How true it is for some. A saddening little tale here Amrit
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
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