Friday, May 15, 2015

Mistake




This Poem is shared with Poets United Midweek Motif - Waves.






44 comments:

  1. Amrit, is your heart somehow involved between these words and lines? Hmmmm? --grin!

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    1. Perhaps the after effect of watching too many sentimental movies at a stretch :-D

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  2. Oh, this is hard....to be swept away like that!

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  3. Oh man, love would do that to you. Very nicely written!

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  4. the sadness is so palpable...Beautifully penned!

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  5. Sad for him, happy for your great work.

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  6. the rhythm is beautiful, just draws us in...love is like a mirror that reflects the world as well as self...nicely done Amrit :)

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  7. The ending could not have been more perfect. Beautifully penned!

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  8. Yes, it is a sad place to be, very well captured.

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  9. This was a bit heart breaking... must be an awful state for a person to be in. Beautifully penned!

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  10. The post dump blues wonderfully expressed.

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  11. Great usage of words Amrit. Powerful poem about love or its antithesis.

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  12. So touching! Your work could really touch others' hearts, Amrit.

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  13. The waves in this poem increase the sense of loss--whether loss of love or loss of self in love, I am not sure!

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  14. Reminded me of Devdas, not the film but the classic novel.

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  15. Know that old saying, if loving you is wrong, I don't want to be right? How true it is for some. A saddening little tale here Amrit

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