Saturday, May 09, 2015

A Dream, A Nightmare

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a dream so hauntingly pretty
that he woke up to nightmares
not knowing what they meant
not knowing what they showed
but a smile would linger
on every favoured dawn

disobeying thoughts
he lived on impulse
where every single moment
was a dream carved in snow
frozen one day
lost, the next



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29 comments:

  1. ... I know about dreams frozen in snow ... just ask me ... smies ...Lovely poem, Mr.G ... Always, cat.

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  2. A dream so hauntingly pretty - that is a nice perspective and then when you talk about dream curved in snow - you show us a lot of raw emotions. Well done.

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  3. The fleeting moment of such beauty like a dream or something carved a snow.. yes this is how beauty often is.

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  4. Yes some dreams elude us, while some are suspended in time. Nice piece!

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  5. some dreams should better remain buried under snow, lest they would destroy us................

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  6. what is life if you have a dream that causes it seem like a nightmare? I don't want to have the answer... A beautiful write that can be interpreted in many ways :)

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  7. It is sad when night is an escape (in dreams) from the nightmare of days. Excellent write.
    Anna :o]

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  8. dreams carved in snow..! deep thoughts.. Your lines still lingering in my head.. nightmare or a dream? i am yet to find out. Wonderful piece of writing.. love it!

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  9. Nicely written! I hope we can fathom where the cross line is between a dream and a nightmare.

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  10. Carries profound meaning... Good one!

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  11. Haunting and pretty, yes, at the same time.

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  12. That's what the beauty of a dream is.. haunting, yet exciting!!

    Cheers

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  13. It's beautiful Amrit!! As always!

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