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a dream so hauntingly pretty
that he woke up to nightmares
not knowing what they meant
not knowing what they showed
but a smile would linger
on every favoured dawn
disobeying thoughts
he lived on impulse
where every single moment
was a dream carved in snow
frozen one day
lost, the next
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... I know about dreams frozen in snow ... just ask me ... smies ...Lovely poem, Mr.G ... Always, cat.
ReplyDeleteThank You Cat :-)
DeleteA dream so hauntingly pretty - that is a nice perspective and then when you talk about dream curved in snow - you show us a lot of raw emotions. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Abhra :-)
DeleteThe fleeting moment of such beauty like a dream or something carved a snow.. yes this is how beauty often is.
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
DeleteYes some dreams elude us, while some are suspended in time. Nice piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
Deletesome dreams should better remain buried under snow, lest they would destroy us................
ReplyDeleteI agree :-)
Deletewhat is life if you have a dream that causes it seem like a nightmare? I don't want to have the answer... A beautiful write that can be interpreted in many ways :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
DeleteIt is sad when night is an escape (in dreams) from the nightmare of days. Excellent write.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thank You Anna :-)
Deletedreams carved in snow..! deep thoughts.. Your lines still lingering in my head.. nightmare or a dream? i am yet to find out. Wonderful piece of writing.. love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabeeha :-)
DeleteNicely written! I hope we can fathom where the cross line is between a dream and a nightmare.
ReplyDeleteThank You Onomiroro :-)
DeleteCarries profound meaning... Good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
DeleteWow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteThank You Lux :-)
DeleteHaunting and pretty, yes, at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThat's what the beauty of a dream is.. haunting, yet exciting!!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Thank You Geetika :-)
DeleteVery much poetical.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteIt's beautiful Amrit!! As always!
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