Friday, May 10, 2013

Story

smiling away
she whispers stories
fun gossips

~ o ~ o ~

lost stories
stacked mercilessly
aloof


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Story.








36 comments:

  1. Love this...'smiling away'
    Thanks for sharing
    Regards

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  2. whispers..fantastic.
    (hello there)

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    1. Thanks Audra :-) Have a great day :-)

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  3. loved your take esp the second one. So many stories are not documented and results in loss of indigenous knowledge and anecdotes!

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  4. Gossips are sometimes not fun :-)

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  5. These are both fantastic the 2nd one was my favorite =)

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  6. Two different viewpoints on stories. Enjoyed!

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  7. Can we hold on to our lost stories somehow? Trembling

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  8. Gossips are always juicy :P Well penned, Speck.

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  9. Adore your second haiku...stacked mercilessly aloof. Wonderful words!

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  10. I really like the second one!

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  11. Lost stories are like lost treasures... waiting to be unearthed. As for gossips well, who doesn't enjoy a dose of it :)

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  12. I love the second one! It expresses the harsh reality of our stories piling up and facing oblivion!

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  13. ... smiling ... keep smiling ... please ... even at me ... some stranger on the street, like me ... you know, the one on cyber street, that follows your cyber blog ... Love, cat.

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    1. Friends aren't stranger my dear cat :-)

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  14. Both are good but may I say I enjoyed the first the most. I could see her face smiling as she whispered.

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  15. I enjoyed each haiku. You can hear the gossip from her lips. Nicely written.

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  16. The last is my very favorite - you said it all.

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  17. Makes me yearn to listen to one of stories.

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