Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Bridge



sun and moon
playing hide and seek
under the bridge

lone traveler
walks along the bridge
seeking true light


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Bridge.





38 comments:

  1. These are absolutely exquisite! Love!

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  2. Love them both. I have traveled across a bridge or two in my time :)

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  3. Love the idea of the lone traveler seeking....as he walks the bridge!

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  4. Loved the hide and seek - nicely done!

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  5. this is exquisite... I feel more meanings underlying here ... about life... nice!

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  6. Both Haiku have a charm of their own, the first one is more playful while the second is more philosophical...

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  7. Charming and loved the first, with the little game that the sun and moon play!!

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  8. Both so very beautiful. Love ♥

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  9. simple sweet and beautiful...wish i could write haikus too..:(

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    1. And I wish I could write stories like you :-)

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  10. Both were great. I particularly like the second.

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  11. 1st one is soo unique!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/05/bridging-hearts.html

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  12. Excellent...both superb ... the second speaks louder to me.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  13. Each is wonderful but together they are complete. (even tho we are not suppose to write haiku as a "haiku poem"! - I always secretly look for the thread - don't tell anyone. . . )
    Really really nice haiku

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    1. Ha ha ... I won't tell your secret anyone, don't worry :-P

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  14. beautiful haiku! The time when both sun and moon are up in the sky is beautiful and the place you set up sounds perfect!

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