Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Hushed Fiction




when words were drenched in winter rain
and silence made me go insane

I drew a chapter new
flaming red, me and you

you smelt of honey
in winter dusk
amidst pages
cologne and
musk

but was this fake
you were my take
brimming with passion
my penned creation

the hours grew still
and I heard your voice
calling out my name
well, I had no choice

'cause I was burnt in this obsession
smouldering you, my hushed fiction


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42 comments:

  1. Great metaphor; beautiful, sensual phrases. 'Hushed Fiction' is such a lovely memorable term!

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  2. Wow......what a delight to read and I adored the format!

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  3. "you smelt of honey
    in winter dusk" ooo love this phrase!

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  4. Wow; soulfully penned. I loved each and every line... :)

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  5. I especially loved "you smelt of honey in the winter dusk", too. Beautiful write!

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  6. This is a catchy poem. I liked the opening it grabs the reader. I am sure that chapter is hot.

    I drew a chapter new
    flaming red, me and you

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  7. every line allured the attention of the readers that smelt of cologne and musk mesmerizing the mind:))

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  8. Enjoyed every line! Well written, and excellent twist! Way to go!

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  9. Hushed fiction can seem so real....like internet romance ! Sensual images.

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  10. beautiful, artistic just par excellence!

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  11. Very well expressed!
    Imagine your character calling your name :)

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  12. I just loved this one, Amrit. :)

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  13. writing can be a passion and an obsession; i hear you

    http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2015/02/25.html

    much love...

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  14. Beautiful poem. Creativity should never be hushed.

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  15. Lyrical and lovely...this one needs music...

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  16. The person of your poem wouldn't be the first to fall in love with his own creation. Love your images!

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  17. This is beautiful.

    "I drew a chapter new
    flaming red, me and you"

    "you smelt of honey
    in winter dusk
    amidst pages
    cologne and
    musk"

    My favourite lines.

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  18. Dramatic, intense, vibrant word picture

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