Saturday, January 17, 2015

Lost In The Mist

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let no eyes see us
as we paint the skies anew
lost in the mist


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Shiki's "Lost In The Mist."



27 comments:

  1. this is such a beautiful Haiku!

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  2. I like the way the mist becomes a barrier between us and a the rest. There is hope in such togetherness

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  3. How nice to have the privacy! :)

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  4. "Let no one see us," what a hook line! It's magnetic! I love it!!

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    1. Let no eyes see us, correction.. Magnetic nonetheless! :)

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  5. its cool...the first and last lines make a snadwich around the middle....the coloring the sky is an interesting contrast to the other two...i like much...

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  6. lovely haiku that compels our eyes to see the beautiful lines:)

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  7. Oh Amrit, this is simply beautiful.

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  8. Sshhh...
    Lets no one disturb you :)

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