Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Let Me Not Wake Up






This Poem is shared with Picture It And Write.



23 comments:

  1. Your poem got me reminded of wake me up when its all over...nice poem indeed.

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  2. ya ... let me not wake up right now ... but knowing me ... I will ... eager to see what it is the next bend ...

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    1. That's what we would all like to know ... the next bend :-)

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  3. Sometimes we all want to stay in that beautiful dream-state for as long as possible :)

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  4. this is such a motivating poem. Dreams keep us alive and hopeful. Loved it :)

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  5. A beautiful statement of trust and hope.

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  6. You have to stop that you know... showing off that incredible talent of yours young man! Where's my ruler?? HAHA! I love it Amrit!!! It's very beautiful, and very well touching!

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    1. Ha ha ha ... thanks so much Crystal :-)

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  7. How do you write so beautifully every time! :) You are an endless source of poetry!

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  8. Oh Amrit, so movingly beautiful!

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  9. I really liked the last stanza. Beautiful. Thanks for contributing this week, Amrit!

    - Ermisenda

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