Friday, August 29, 2014

Stardust

that blue little star
fell down in the frozen lake
once diamond, now dust


This Haiku is shared with Haiku My Heart - Stardust.



30 comments:

  1. This is so deep and meaningful. Loved it.

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  2. this is how we transit in life from a cell to shining glory to ashes

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  3. What a wonderful sweet haiku!

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  4. I feel bad for the little star.

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  5. a tiny haiku that captures so powerfully enormous transition. thank you Amrit for your brilliant use of the prompt stardust and your place in our haiku hearts!

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  6. transition, even for the stars, lovely haiku; have a nice weekend

    much love...

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  7. Ah, very powerful and enlightening haiku ~ Happy Weekend to you!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  8. ... twinkle, twinkle, little star ... don't wonder no more how you are ... cuz u r dust :)

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  9. Lovely...
    And thought provoking...
    Beauty is not forever, it says!

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  10. What a poetic way to describe the cycle of life for a star!

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  11. dramatic and wonderful haiku!

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