Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Flames

drenched in flames
two souls, entangled in rain
it's pouring passion


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Flame.



20 comments:

  1. Awwww what a picture perfect romance :)

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  2. Flaming passion in three lines... I immediately thought of certain Bollywood Songs on reading it, though :)

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  3. I set fire to the rain...playing in my mind....loved "entangled in rain"

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  4. Hot and steamy love .... wow Amrit ... nicely written.

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  5. Very romantic...
    Really nice!
    Flame and rain :)

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  6. I think that some flames can never be quenched by rain

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  7. I like how you balance the flames and the rain.

    Crimson Flame

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  8. I love the contrast of flames and rains...so much passion.

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  9. passionate, perfect romance

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  10. "pouring passion" - Perfect!

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