Thursday, June 12, 2014

Wishes



I wish for us to be happy.
I wish you are never too sad.
I wish for me.
I wish for you.
I wish love hadn't turn out so bad.


This Micro-Fiction is shared with Five Sentence Fiction - Wishes.




44 comments:

  1. So sad when love ends...but it speaks good of you that you still write beautifully about a love that was lost. Better than writing angrily :)

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  2. Good but a sad one! Wish a beautiful love hadn't ended!

    Wishes

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  3. It's so sad that love turned out so sad for both of them.

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  4. Ohh... I wish things turn out better. Very nicely done.
    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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  5. That is one of the most compact responses to the prompt ever :) Excellent job!

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  6. Short crisp yet beautiful :)

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  7. Oh! What a beauty this one was. Limited words that pack such a punch.

    *Gets off the Lioness gear and bows down*

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  8. I wish all your wishes come true.

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  9. Ohh, that's sad, Love stories don't always end with a happily ever after :(

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  10. Awww that last line is a real heart clencher. What a lovely poem!! Brilliant! ♥

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  11. Sweet and sad! Words are quite catchy!

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  12. So simple yet so sweet.....beautifully expressed!

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  13. so deep and touching....
    loved it!

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  14. You speak so much in such few words ....I do admire that :)

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  15. Crispy post.. wish someone understands that there is someone to care :)

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  16. An instant favourite. Infinite stories condensed within these five lines. There is a certain awe in stories told in such a succinct manner, especially for someone like me who always needs way too many words to convey a simple idea. Loved this!

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  17. May your wishes come true. Well-expressed! :)

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