Friday, May 02, 2014

A few Naughty Winds

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a few naughty winds
come knocking at my door
in hours past midnight
one, two, three and four
they scribble on the roof
and scramble on the floor
clinging to the walls
I hear whispers in the store

when shadows yearn for stealth
the winds come out to play
in gleeful company and misty solitude
these rhyming winds forever will stay


This Poem is shared with Theme Thursday - Winds.



24 comments:

  1. Amrit I really like this one. I am interpreting these winds as metaphorical as opposed to literal? Both interpretations would be beautiful :)

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  2. Beautiful! You have a flair for both prose and poetry! :)

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  3. Loved the description of the wind as being naughty.

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  4. I think of the wind as spirit...good or bad--always changing, and always blowing, either with softness or violence. I like much reflecting on things like this, and especially with your words guiding.....
    PEACE and LIGHT, Amrit

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  5. These rhyming WORDS forever will stay...

    Beautiful!

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  6. Lovely fantastic and impossible dreams ... why not? ... while they last ... hmmm?

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  7. You make me sick!!! Is there anything you can't write your heart and soul out??? From what I've seen, there is no stopping you! The last couple posts that I've just read, are amazing!!! I gravel at your feet your highness! LOL! :)

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    1. Now you made me sick with such high praises ... I am still a learner Crystal, and have learnt a lot from efficient writers like you. Thank You so much :-)

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  8. How beautiful...Now at night this would play in my mind..

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  9. Almost lyrical ya. Nice choice of words.

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  10. Brilliantly done Amrit. I'm glad Aditi recommended your blog :)

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    1. That's so kind of Aditi ... thank you so much for visiting :-)

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  11. waow!! this is simply awesome ... :)

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