Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Niraj



"God, this cell phone sucks." With the mobile switching off again in the midst of their conversation, anger rose in his veins. Niraj threw the device hard on the wall, the impact leading to a thousand pieces of metal.

"Time for some action." Niraj collected the pieces and ran towards the kitchen. In a kettle of hot water, he poured the junks, waiting for them to dissolve. A bluish solution formed after a few minutes, and he gulped it in one go.

"Who needs a phone now?" He dialed the numbers in his mind, and got connected once again.


This 99 word fiction is shared with Blogging from A to Z April Challenge - N.



42 comments:

  1. My phone also sucks most of the time. Thanks for the solution :P

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  2. No device in the world can match the anticipation, sweet love and wait of a landline. I so miss blank calls from school days. Now you can see who is calling you and just act snobbish. Those were the time, when papa got a caller id ;p

    Oh ! small town pleasures.

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    1. True ... blank calls made us feel like heartthrobs :p

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    2. Aaaah... I miss those days too...
      It was also a time when we all made time for loved ones...
      Now we only make excuses!

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  3. Interesting recipe for phone :P

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  4. lol what an innovative solution :-D thanks for d recipe (cant say i am trying it though :-P)

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    1. You should try, who knows, may be it will be the dawn of a new scientific revolution :p

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  5. My SamsungS4 works like a charm--in it's second year.
    So that bluish solution is what I use to wash my scooter...or anything else.
    --25 words--grin!

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    1. At least the bluish solution helps you with something :p

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  6. How could you do that!! Is it true or just an imagination?

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    1. Just a figment of my weird imagination :p

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  7. hahahahahahahahahhaah....I need to try this one out.

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  8. A sweet thought in short form.

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  9. This story is an outcome of out-of-the-box... Oops! out-of-the-phone thinking...
    Well done!

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  10. Haha...the weirdest solution!! Love it! ;)

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  11. Hhahahaha.. wow! Who could have thought that? :P

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  12. You took me by surprise! Excellent!

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  13. Lol I've thrown my phone at the wall in anger.the blasted this didn't break one bit.not even a scratch!

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    1. You should have thrown harder ... please try again :p

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  14. Aiyyoo! What was that! 😀😀 But I liked it, just as I liked your other writings! :-)

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  15. Wha...?? What did he do? Usko bolo mekko bhi sikhaae. Please.

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