Thursday, April 10, 2014

A Wait So Sweet

his fingers count
days left to return home
a wait so sweet

a wait so sweet
tunes of songs familiar
rains upon him

rains upon him
minutes, hours pass, teasingly
his fingers count


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Home.





22 comments:

  1. Exactly how i felt during each exam, counting down days for vacation and home :) Loved it Amrit

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  2. Such a sweet one this. The anticipation is amplified by the imagery of someone counting days in fingers. Beautiful. I could see a tried army man waiting to get back home.

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  3. Nice post, i hope everyone will like your post..

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  4. Thanks for sharing this wonderful post, It is awesome.

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  5. nice work Amrit ! reminds me of those times in hostels ...!

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  6. ahhhh Amrit, there is nothing like home

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