Monday, April 07, 2014

Fawad



"Fawad I'm. What's your name ma'am?"

Though blessed with conventionally good looks, all his attempts to flirt failed to cook.

He thought he rhymed well; but, his words could never sell.

"Don't worry, why hurry? Today you refuse, tomorrow you will be sorry."

He set to write a better song, verses that would woo without going wrong.

"Fawad means heart, I promise not to part. Girl, let's just start. Why you still playing dart?"

He kept failing, ailing, but still, he didn't stop rhyming.

"Your eyes blue, let's kiss like glue. Why not baby? I don't have a clue."


This 99 word fiction is shared with Blogging from A to Z April Challenge - F.


36 comments:

  1. Girl :
    Oh! Fawad please don't rhyme,
    There is considerable waiting time,
    Since you are in a queue,
    Either you stick or rue.

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  2. I can relate to the subject. Not sure if that's a positive thing...

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    1. There sure is positivism in everything :p

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  3. Awesome. :)

    And not to mention Deaf Mamma's also sounded great. :D

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    1. Yeah ... she gave a fitting reply to Fawad :p

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  4. With those rhymes, girls ought to run away :P

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  5. Fawad should do what I've been trying to do for a whole lifetime.
    SHUT UP AND LISTEN.

    I wonder Amrit--was it difficult to construct those poorly writtn rhymes?--grin!

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    1. Steve, as you know by now, I am a master of poorly written poems, so they didn't seem so difficult to me :-p

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  6. Ha ha...
    Crazy write-up it is!

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  7. hahahahahah...Kiss like glue..hahahahahahha

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  8. Perhaps he is trying to hard...rather than just letting it be :)

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    1. Yes ... he needs a good teacher :-P

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  9. Nice to connect and follow http://aimingforapublishingdeal.blogspot.co.uk/

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  10. kiss like glue? Ewww!! No wonder girls run away from him...

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  11. cute :) ... have a feeling he'll be alright ... :)

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  12. No No NO! Fawad is a beautiful name! this shall be ingrained in memory!

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  13. Hilarious! I adore Deaf Mama's comment above-- such a fitting reply to Fawad :)

    Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2014, My Latest post

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  14. Why not baby? Ask Abu Azmi :P
    Nice one :D

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