Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Magic Field

magic field
where peacocks dance
to nature's flute

magic field
brimming with dreams
of happy sunshine

magic field
where love is ploughed
in ember embrace


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Magic Fields.



34 comments:

  1. Very bright and fresh like as though its out of a treasure box.

    Hope you write more and more and more.

    Thank you for the freshness and innocence.

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  2. The magic field has a magical touch.The last two lines are really mind blowing.

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  3. So beautiful! Your words really shine. :)

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  4. I love the idea of a magic field, being surrounded by everything magical!!

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  5. I love finding a magic field in the middle of nowhere. Love the closing stanza here.

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  6. The second is my favourite:)

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  7. These fields of yours are so inviting. Thank you for sharing their magic!

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  8. Very colorful and creative word visuals in your cascading haiku ~ thanks, carol, xo

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  9. I love a visit to those magic fields

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  10. Awesome description of Magic Fields ... sounds like the fields of the Wizard of Oz ... Very nicely written Amrit.

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  11. Anytime the peacocks dance, there's surely magic in the air!

    That Old Field Magic

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  12. Ah! Sweet poetry! Love it, like always!

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  13. The last one made me sigh and think of old loves. So beautiful.

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  14. Loved the 3 magic fields! The first one is my favorite :)

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