No dear
I hear you not
Though spring is here
It's still hot hot hot.
Love no no
Got a lot on my plate
Just go man go
I'm not in your fate.
Stop staring
I know am pretty
Tring Tring
Your ringtone too crappy.
This love nonsensical
You are just not my type
First grow some curls
Before you ping me on Skype.
This Poem is shared with Mag - 164.
Online love/ text love should be a "NO Go" ... unless you have a death wish
ReplyDeleteI surely agree :D
Deleteoh my God....Amrit you are so versatile.... funny....
ReplyDeleteI just try ... glad you liked it :D
Deletelol
ReplyDeleteCyberrific...
ReplyDeleteThanks Berowne :-)
Deletefunny but good one..!!:)
ReplyDeleteThank You buddy :-)
DeleteLove it,,,oh the follies of online love, or lack thereof,,, and the let down of "Just go man go
ReplyDeleteI'm not in your fate."
I like the modern twist. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Charleen :-)
DeleteGreat fun. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
DeleteToo funny...couldn't help but smile :):):)
ReplyDeleteI am glad I could make you smile :D
DeleteHaha! Online love, huh? Fun write!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
DeleteLove nonsensical is the perfect title for your funny poem!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Helen :-)
DeleteNicely humorous. Ring tones wreck romance.
ReplyDeleteThanks Trellis :-)
DeleteI can hear music to this one...thanks for the giggles...
ReplyDeleteThank You Tess :-)
DeleteYou really updated this picture to today!
ReplyDeleteThanks Robyn :D
DeleteAh, young love in the 21st century! Heehee, good one.
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
DeleteA modern take on an age old theme! lol
ReplyDeleteJust tried my bit :-)
DeleteOh gosh, batting for the wrong side !
ReplyDeleteTough luck :D
DeleteGreat job! I also had the impression to that he was more interested than she when I first say the painting
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting :-)
Deletehaha a fun post! really enjoyed reading this. ^^
ReplyDeleteThanks kz :-)
Deletecould almost be a song
ReplyDeleteThank You Chris :-)
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