Saturday, April 13, 2013

Lily

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white petals unfold
nature's fragmented whispers
modern man ignores


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Lily.








40 comments:

  1. Modern man doesn't have time and therefore gets ignored to by lilies...well said..Amrit..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/she-holds-lily.html

    RS

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  2. Truth well said ...nice one :)

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  3. modern man does ignore, don't they(us?)!! brilliant! Loved it..
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  4. Modern man just has no time to listen to natures whispers and enjoy it!! Lifestyles have changed don't know for better or for worse!!

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    1. I am pretty sure it is for the worse. What peaceful and sane world would neglect nature and be content with their ways.

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    2. "Nature's fragmented whispers" - nicely done!

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    3. And we are to be blamed for this commotion !!!

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  5. I like "fragmented whispers" as well. Nice.

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  6. Yes, would that we were more in tune with nature.

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  7. That's true.
    Modern man ignores.

    Beautifully written. :)

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  8. Excellent ... and I agree with the others about the phrase
    "fragmented whispers"...perfect combination of words
    Peace
    Siggi

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  9. one of those whispers. Well done.

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  10. An observing one. Perfect combination of words that make us reflect on our own selves.

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  11. Insightful haiku. I guess we are that group of modern men and women who are not ignoring nature's fragmented whisper :)

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  12. "nature's fragmented whispers"...that my friend is why you are an incredible writer.

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    1. Thank You for such kind words Keith :-)

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    1. Ha ha ... perhaps you can answer that better ;-)

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  14. So true. I guess lily is too classical for modern man. :)

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    1. Common man perhaps can't intake the essence of beauty !!!

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  15. You have folded the truth into this beautifully

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  16. Another stunner, GS. I love `fragmented whispers.'

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  17. 'nature's fragmented whispers' Powerful line

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