Friday, February 05, 2016

Road Trip

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come on come on
hit the road
road - road - road - road (Chorus)
shed the burden
unfasten the load
load - load - load - load (Chorus)

come on come on
hit the road
shed the burden
unfasten the load
be the joy
and your own hope
don't make trouble
adventure is your dope

we shall ride through Bahamas
we will sail the Panamas
this road trip come discover
in your tees and pajamas
let's make beaches our home
and jungles the playgrounds
the world isn't flat
we'll drive all around

come on come on
hit the road
road - road - road - road (Chorus)
shed the burden
unfasten the load
load - load - load - load (Chorus)


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35 comments:

  1. Terrific, loved it to the core.

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  2. I can hear this as a song. Sounds fun.

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  3. Yeah. I can dig it. This would an awesome song.

    "shed the burden
    unfasten the load"

    "don't make trouble
    adventure is your dope"

    Really, I'd love to hear this sung/performed.

    You are rad!

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  4. I want to hop right behind the wheel! I especially love "be the joy and your own hope." That's the secret!

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  5. You make me want to go... yes... with the right friends the journey is the joy.

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  6. I love this: "be the joy" :)
    Road Trip!

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  7. superb :-)

    Cheers, Archana - www.drishti.co

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  8. Makes me feel like pack up and go for a road trip. :)

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  9. Thats my most liked perspective.. Nice capture

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  10. What a fun ride this poem is!

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  11. This is super cool.. Enjoyed the lyrics :)

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  12. Road travels
    human moves
    connects creates
    Road travels
    human cars
    move..
    without
    connecting
    creating..
    Roads travel
    destinations
    change moving
    connecting
    and
    creating
    travel..:)

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  13. Makes me wanna go out and go on a road trip. Stat!

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  14. What a song... Full of of zeal!!!
    Come on... Come on!!!

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  15. HAAAA!!! That is great fun! Pick up the guitar and record that! What a great take on the prompt, a great way to paint the freedom of the Road Trip. Great job and thanks for playing!!!

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  16. Had there been no road, how difficult the journey would be.

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