Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Like Rose, Like Love



thorns
and petals
and ups and downs
love is a game
of lost and found
its a blessing
and a gift
it binds all rifts
a rose that blooms
in seasons
not makeshift



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18 comments:

  1. Lovely - especially love the comparison of life's ups and downs with petals and thorn :D
    Beautifully written. Thank you so much for participating :D


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. Love is both the fragrance and the thorns.. it's a journey usually... and a reminder of our minds.

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  3. Loved the rhythm in it. :)

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  4. A lovely use of rhymes throughout to create a pretty picture.

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  5. Love the last two lines... They sound so true. ♥

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  6. lovely...
    Cheers, Archana - www.travelwitharchie.com

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  7. Love though not always smooth, can work miracles.
    ..

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  8. Very true, a love has to arise from truthful emotions.

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  9. Love is game of lost and found. Lovely lines Amrit :)

    Cheers

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  10. Such a lovely portrayal of the truth of love!

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  11. Lovely take on love. The lucid , rhythmic and smooth flow of the poem makes it very refreshing.

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  12. Nice post. True words here. Beautiful poem. I like it.

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  13. True,love blooms through ups and downs.

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