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thorns
and petals
and ups and downs
love is a game
of lost and found
its a blessing
and a gift
it binds all rifts
a rose that blooms
in seasons
not makeshift
This Poem is shared with
- Theme Thursday - Rose,
- Prompt Nights - To Love Would Be Sublime,
- Mindlovemisery's Menagerie - Music Prompt #29 “Read My Mind” by The Killers,
- Imaginary Garden - The Tuesday Platform.
Lovely - especially love the comparison of life's ups and downs with petals and thorn :D
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. Thank you so much for participating :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks Sanaa :)
Deletelove the see saw rhythm....
ReplyDeleteThank You Sumana :)
DeleteLove is both the fragrance and the thorns.. it's a journey usually... and a reminder of our minds.
ReplyDeleteWell said Bjorn :)
DeleteLoved the rhythm in it. :)
ReplyDeleteA lovely use of rhymes throughout to create a pretty picture.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerry :)
DeleteLove the last two lines... They sound so true. ♥
ReplyDeleteThank You Magaly :)
Deletelovely...
ReplyDeleteCheers, Archana - www.travelwitharchie.com
Thanks Archana :-)
DeleteLove though not always smooth, can work miracles.
ReplyDelete..
Thank You Jim :-)
DeleteVery true, a love has to arise from truthful emotions.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana :-)
DeleteLove is game of lost and found. Lovely lines Amrit :)
ReplyDeleteCheers
Such a lovely portrayal of the truth of love!
ReplyDeleteLovely take on love. The lucid , rhythmic and smooth flow of the poem makes it very refreshing.
ReplyDeleteNice post. True words here. Beautiful poem. I like it.
ReplyDeleteSweet and romantic ~
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely and true....!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and true!
ReplyDeleteA perfect image in your poem.
ReplyDeleteTrue,love blooms through ups and downs.
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