Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Snow, Love


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"I love it when it snows," said she.

"I love it when you talk of snow," said he.

And they played, hit each other with snowballs, giggled, hugged, kissed.

"Will you return?" she asked.

He stayed silent. She closed her eyes. He was gone.

Nearby, the snowman stood still, smiling.


This 50-words Flash Fiction is shared with A Week For Writing - A Flash Of Winter.



20 comments:

  1. delightful opening.......and such an ending! nice!!

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  2. Nice and hopeful image that winter will be just about tease and game and love.....thanks :)

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  3. She must be in anguish. Well written.

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  4. Aw. A sweet winter glimpse of love . Nice.

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  5. Great piece of writing. Though the snowman is smiling, he seems a cold substitute.

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  6. Snow fall is magical. It seems to make for magical moments :)

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  7. Beautiful writing as always! I enjoyed it so much though the ending is "cold". Thank you, Amrit. :)

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  8. Love is here in these fifty words.

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