Broken but resolute - there is a strength in this piece - a sense of having the courage to rebuild
good desires and cravings true to a poet....
I love the last two lines.
Nice to see you, Amrit. I second Jae, I feel strength in this poem.
Beautiful!!! Such wisdom and strength in your poem!
So often people answer "I'm fine" when they are anything BUT fine.
I think we should be our scars of healing with pride...
Strong poem. Good to see you.
I don't understand what you refer to in the closing lines, but I do like the way the poem is crafted.
The poem reads well but am sorry you've turned your back on wine! Some are very friendly.
Whoa! Powerful statement!!!ZQ
Time heals and its brave of you to face up to this premisemuch love...
Beautiful.
Powerful, exquisite poetry here, Amrit. I love this poem!
To heal what is broken in us,,,a wonderful thought,,a beautiful poem :-)
Goes to the heart directly.Nice.
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Nice to see you, Amrit. Beautiful! lines here. Thanks for this poem. Well written.
Broken and healed.Pleasant end.Nice thoughts.
Nicely written.. Time is a great healer.
Broken but resolute - there is a strength in this piece - a sense of having the courage to rebuild
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ReplyDeleteI love the last two lines.
ReplyDeleteNice to see you, Amrit. I second Jae, I feel strength in this poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!! Such wisdom and strength in your poem!
ReplyDeleteSo often people answer "I'm fine" when they are anything BUT fine.
ReplyDeleteI think we should be our scars of healing with pride...
ReplyDeleteStrong poem. Good to see you.
ReplyDeleteI don't understand what you refer to in the closing lines, but I do like the way the poem is crafted.
ReplyDeleteThe poem reads well but am sorry you've turned your back on wine! Some are very friendly.
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Powerful statement!!!
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Time heals and its brave of you to face up to this premise
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Beautiful.
ReplyDeletePowerful, exquisite poetry here, Amrit. I love this poem!
ReplyDeleteTo heal what is broken in us,,,a wonderful thought,,a beautiful poem :-)
ReplyDeleteGoes to the heart directly.Nice.
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ReplyDeleteNice to see you, Amrit. Beautiful! lines here. Thanks for this poem. Well written.
ReplyDeleteBroken and healed.Pleasant end.Nice thoughts.
ReplyDeleteNicely written.. Time is a great healer.
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