Sunday, September 04, 2016

Broken

23 comments:

  1. Broken but resolute - there is a strength in this piece - a sense of having the courage to rebuild

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  2. good desires and cravings true to a poet....

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  3. I love the last two lines.

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  4. Nice to see you, Amrit. I second Jae, I feel strength in this poem.

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  5. Beautiful!!! Such wisdom and strength in your poem!

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  6. So often people answer "I'm fine" when they are anything BUT fine.

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  7. I think we should be our scars of healing with pride...

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  8. Strong poem. Good to see you.

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  9. I don't understand what you refer to in the closing lines, but I do like the way the poem is crafted.

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  10. The poem reads well but am sorry you've turned your back on wine! Some are very friendly.

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  11. Whoa! Powerful statement!!!
    ZQ

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  12. Time heals and its brave of you to face up to this premise

    much love...

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  13. Powerful, exquisite poetry here, Amrit. I love this poem!

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  14. To heal what is broken in us,,,a wonderful thought,,a beautiful poem :-)

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  15. Goes to the heart directly.Nice.

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  16. Nice article thanks for sharing with us.
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  17. Nice to see you, Amrit. Beautiful! lines here. Thanks for this poem. Well written.

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  18. Broken and healed.Pleasant end.Nice thoughts.

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  19. Nicely written.. Time is a great healer.

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