I will kiss your letter
and post it in the box
then wait for it to come back
and re-read on the rocks
the pen that you once held
to script a fairy tale
now lies dumped somewhere
love, we simply failed
I was once your queen of hearts
you bestowed on me gifts galore
was that night our swansong
morning you left me far ashore
how could I leave you thus
your fragrance on my lips
am I wrong to think this way
you sealed betrayal with a kiss
no more letters from you
nor any words of hope
I now treasure the words of yore
those mails, my only dope
and thus, I kiss your letter
and post it in the box
then wait for it to come back
and re-read on the rocks
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Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThis is such stunning & emotive write - especially love the reference to treasure the words of yore those mails, my only dope. Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating :D
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Living with memories and hope. Beautiful poem, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru :-)
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ReplyDeleteThank You Monika :-)
DeleteLove the hope that dances all over this poem. Even though it seems the speaker has been kissed by failure and loss, there is no giving up... just moving forward and doing...
ReplyDeleteLoved it. Especially the way you started it.
ReplyDeleteVery nice...
ReplyDeleteI love how this comes full circle to the kiss placed on that letter - which in itself is a beautiful image - effortless flow and a story magical and dark - like a perfect fairy tale
ReplyDeleteLovely poem and the use of full circle always brings us back to the central focus. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThat is just so touching and beautifully penned! <3
ReplyDeleteThe poem beautifully captures the pain of a broken heart and slashed hopes.
ReplyDeleteAmazingly beautiful *_*
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful poem. I enjoyed the story line very much. thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteAmazingly beautiful poem. Well written Sir.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is beautifully executed and packed with emotion. Good job. But, boy, she needs to move on with her life, doesn't she?
ReplyDeleteAwesome idea,Amrit.
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