a flash of lightning—
passing through the darkness
a night heron’s scream
(~ Basho)
only the cloud weeps rain
pitter patter on a barren nest
(~ Amrit)
passing through the darkness
a night heron’s scream
(~ Basho)
only the cloud weeps rain
pitter patter on a barren nest
(~ Amrit)
This Tan Renga is shared with Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge # 103 Basho's "a flash of lightning!".
Summer here, friend G ... lots of sun and lots of thunder storms ... everything is growing like crazy cuz by end of August frost will kill ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteIt's raining here with all those effects so I'm feeling this haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful completion, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully penned!
ReplyDeleteLove this completion Amrit.
ReplyDeleteLove this completion Amrit.
ReplyDeleteLovely lines.
ReplyDeleteA playfull second stanza Amrit
ReplyDeleteWow!!!!
ReplyDeleteNice lines.Thanks for sharing.
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