Saturday, December 13, 2014

Silence





This Poem is shared with Poetry Jam - Quiet.



30 comments:

  1. I like the idea of the silence dispersing. Never thought of it from that angle. Thanks for posting.

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  2. Let the silence fly free ~ I like that play of words in the ending ~

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  3. wow! 'that lay unspoken but not unheard' i <3 these lines! what a perfect imagination Amrit! u r awesome :D

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  4. I think there are a lot of words that are unspoken but not unheard. I think the better someone knows someone else the more likely this is to happen. That kind of silence speaks loudly!

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  5. What a beautiful poem! Loved it! :)

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  6. "a you-stuck me" Very sweet - I've never heard that phrase before.

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  7. Beautifully expressed :)
    For the last line, I thought going with the flow, it'd be love-struck me; then re-read to see that it's you-struck me :)
    Lovely to fly free on the wings!

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  8. Awe-stuck!
    Very nice and romantic :)

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  9. a you stuck me...smiles...this was cute...and some silences are def worth breaking...if love is involved...

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  10. Very beautiful lines, and surely Silence is unsaid but surely not unheard

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  11. Last two lines!!!
    I love it I love it I love it
    :D:D:D

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  12. I like the expression you-struck me. Very romantic.

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