it was dusk
and a grain of sand
that brought us closer
when you touched my hand
your fingers carefully
wiping the sand off my eyes
I wished we were in love
it just felt so nice
our time was up, I'd to leave
adopting a lie I would forever believe
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Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Somali :-)
DeleteAw. Lovely words but kind of a sad story.
ReplyDeleteThank You Lux :-)
Delete...can't force love. But it sounds like an awesome friendship. Or at least a wonderful goodbye.
ReplyDeleteYes. That's what it is :-)
DeleteBeautiful lines :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maliny :-)
Deletebeautiful flow of the desire! :) keep writing!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sowmya :-)
DeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deletethe words soulful, the presentation perfect :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Shweta :-)
DeleteI like the way the first verse looks like a grain of sand!
ReplyDeleteWow!! :D I can imagine this clearly. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Simran :-)
DeleteDidn't see that coming.. But it was a nice read Amrit.. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers
Thanks Geetika :-)
DeleteVery Nice :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Rekha :-)
DeleteNice imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
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