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Tuesday, August 19, 2014

There Are Stories



there are stories
that just sail by
pinning us with hope
and that single crescent lie


This Poem is shared with Magpie Tales- Mag 233.



28 comments:

  1. Nicely expressed in a few words :)

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  2. Those stories are still important though, for we all need to be filled with hope :)

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  3. Beautiful response to the prompt...

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  4. A verse to die for. 'Kya baat hai' was my first reaction.

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  5. I two have penned something on this seeing you lovely lines,amrit .So thank you.

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  6. Oohhhhhh my! I love the openness of the last line. It is open to interpretations! Great Mag. Love and Light, S

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  7. What should I say that I havent already. Loved it.

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  8. Amrit! Friend, you have given us words beautiful...but, WHAT moonlike LIE?--grin!

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  9. What was it that you said? Born writer something! Well, ditto my friend ;)

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  10. Succinct and beautiful!

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  11. Oh Wow! This is incredibly beautiful!

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  12. Lovely interpretation on the prompt ~ Eddie

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